Saturday, January 13, 2007

Depression Comments

Rating: 4.9

The unnamed feelings
Eating me alive, and depression
Is lying inside....
As the thin dark ropes falling from the sky
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Wandering Scarlet 05 April 2007

wow dude ur pretty good. your words speak truthfully, and i feel very much the same way at times. great job!

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Tahnee ? ? ? 27 January 2007

you're talent is amazing. keep on writing dude.

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Nathan Strange 23 January 2007

I'm agreeing with the Alison Smith on this one. It's a good definition of suicide. That feeling of hopelessness kills us all and it's this black hole that we can so easily fall down. Yet is much harder to get back out of. Let us rise above it and take the reigns, steering ourselves away from this horrible feeling. Good poem and the best of luck!

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Alison Smith 20 January 2007

The depth we fall when depressed is deeper than any can know... The strength we find to pull ourselves out is greater...... one step at a time we move through life hoping that we may never fall again.... But we do and we crawl back out.... Alison

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GreenEyes- Amor 19 January 2007

well done i like it

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Nut Fuck * 18 January 2007

this is a wicked poem...i really like it... ? ~SaRaH~?

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