Sunday, April 8, 2007

Depression Comments

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i can't stop wondering why
i sit still and cry
hoping everyday
i change my destructive way
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eboni paul
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Just-another- Poet 20 April 2007

using poetry as a form of therapy is great.. you write your emotions for the world to see. if you ever want help on the structure or thyming of a poem or poems - let me know. writing the way you feel makes for a great poem, but by adding stanza's or rhyme to it and have it not to be forced - makes YOU are great poet. peace lynn

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Shalia Robinson 20 April 2007

Yes gurl I feel ya! ! I have felt this way and no this is not our way!

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Arie Mack 09 April 2007

This one right here express every-thhhhhhhhingsss. on the real tho. Keep writing poems and keep posting them on here, and let everyone know that they are not lone about how they feel, but also keep doing this for you and only you.

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Kevia C 09 April 2007

Wow this is great, its a great way to expression your inner feelings.also, its funny because at times i feel the same way.

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