Saturday, May 14, 2016

Depression Comments

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What do you know about depression?
Tear stained thighs and inner lies
Walls closing in from every direction
Heart beating to the pace of your sorrow
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Chinedu Dike 17 January 2017

An insightful depiction of the deplorable state of life at its lowest ebb - depression, the loss of sunshine in one's life; well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing Aaron.

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Anita Khelawan 26 May 2016

The repetition of do you know about depression? Then you went in to slay what it is in each stanza and how your take on its definition varied was just exhilarating. But at the same time I really hope you overcome yr depression... u are a great poet and I look forward to reading more of yr pieces. I bid u all the best Anita

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Aaron Julien 27 May 2016

I really wanted to emphasize and bring attention to it yk. Many people go through it, but not many people like to open up about it. I wrote this straight from my heart in hopes people similar to me would be able to relate. Thank you for reading, more to come.

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Atasha Williams 20 May 2016

Wow, wonderful expression about depression. But the sweet part is that all things happen in life for a reason, Never out of God's season... Whatever made you depressed love, use it as a catalyst to fuel you into writing more. Keep up the good work, :)

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Aaron Julien 23 May 2016

Thank you so much. I plan to do exactly that. I too strongly believe in destiny and we're all put here for a higher purpose so whatever happens I know I'll get past.

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