Depression is like a tidal wave pulling you further in
You don't feel upto facing anyone or anything
Depression is a huge emphasis on feeling sad and low
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I appreciate the matter-of-fact and frank nature of this write. I think it also has a nice flow, and the last two lines are the strongest. Thx for this write! I wrote various poems on mental-illness, perhaps if you have time you ill be able to peruse my own? Blessings! NS
I felt this as I read it. Great job. Also, ignore the personwho said they laughed at it, as they've obviously nevver had depression or gone through anything.
Such a nice write... Last line I love the most.... You can't understand unless you suffer .... Keep it up.. Naila
Depression is negative. We must allow it to go through.
i love this poem...it touches me...its all the truth.
that last line is oh so very true... i never understood my friend... but now i do.
Awesome depiction of my own feelings put into words better than I seem to be able to do. Thank you