You steal my soul and hide it in the deep
You take my heart away to turn me into a sheep
You come in the night and rape my mind
You peel my imagination like a rind
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I agree with everyone else, depression is like a drug keeping you in the dark, never letting go. Until finally someone showing you the light! Great poem filled with so much emotion!
Your poem helps to shine the light on an important subject. Thanks.
Depression like a dark cloud engulfs the soul in what seems to be a never ending darkness... Excellent poem...
A truly fantastic poem. Beating the demons is hard but it can be done. Its something you just have to keep fighting against. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, For Paul Blackburn. Its a true story.
superb! ! absolutely brilliant...great imagery and exceptional expression.
Mother, this is so deep, I truely believe that it is one of those you orbserve... And suddenly tears flow.. Depression.m can sometimes hurt real hard other just being exhausting, great poem
Beautiful imagination! ! And wonderful expressions! ! ! we feel sepression when our soul be in loneliness! ! !
Beautiful rhyming composition. Love your ink.