My liking for life has been stolen,
A thief came and took it away;
A visitor bent on destruction,
A burglar from hell, you might say.
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It is always good never to give up losing hope t win over the struggle. What a nice affimration of hope and the will to
Sums up what I've experienced perfectly. A good effort & great read. Deep but not depressing! :)
Wonderful poetic treatment of depression without the Imipramine? Love the last line John. Great.
ya know, my MyPoemList is getting crowded after a few years here on PH, but i guess i can squeeze this one in. :) i wonder if i will ever take the time to look at them again.
Of the future I may have been due to, ............let me know if it bothers you to have me question the need/use of to here. and are YOU depressed in 1995 or now? i wonder. of course i have NOT read the ending yet, and i just noticed some mention of a happy ending in another comment. there is hope! mind-battle-zone. .........nice description! Death to Depression! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! right on! nice rhyming, flow, and content. drugs can work also i've been told, but caution is advised! bri :)
I love every line, and am so relieved to see that he could be conquered.
Yes, I see we have that burden in common. Yes my Black Dog does address much the same issue. I feel a number of my poems have been affected by it. You have expressed it here so well as well as the redemption. I hope I can find the joy you express in many of your other works.
Good subject and good outcome in this very frank poem of yours. I'm sure lots of people can relate to it and I know I certainly can.
So pleased you have now recovered - well expressed in your poem, a great write.
Thanks for sharing your struggle and the way of winning over it. Nicely written!