Friday, August 17, 2012

Depression Comments

Rating: 5.0

My liking for life has been stolen,
A thief came and took it away;
A visitor bent on destruction,
A burglar from hell, you might say.
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John Carter Brown
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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 16 February 2024

Thanks for sharing your struggle and the way of winning over it. Nicely written!

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 16 February 2024

It is always good never to give up losing hope t win over the struggle. What a nice affimration of hope and the will to

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David Carter 18 December 2015

Sums up what I've experienced perfectly. A good effort & great read. Deep but not depressing! :)

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Joe Hughes 25 November 2015

Wonderful poetic treatment of depression without the Imipramine? Love the last line John. Great.

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Bri Edwards 08 February 2015

ya know, my MyPoemList is getting crowded after a few years here on PH, but i guess i can squeeze this one in. :) i wonder if i will ever take the time to look at them again.

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Bri Edwards 08 February 2015

Of the future I may have been due to, ............let me know if it bothers you to have me question the need/use of to here. and are YOU depressed in 1995 or now? i wonder. of course i have NOT read the ending yet, and i just noticed some mention of a happy ending in another comment. there is hope! mind-battle-zone. .........nice description! Death to Depression! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! right on! nice rhyming, flow, and content. drugs can work also i've been told, but caution is advised! bri :)

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Mary Forrester 20 January 2015

A great write John and I can certainly relate to it.

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Cherry Kell 13 October 2012

Truly amazing stuff! Thank you so much!

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Constance K Yost 15 September 2012

I love every line, and am so relieved to see that he could be conquered.

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Greg Davidson 04 September 2012

Yes, I see we have that burden in common. Yes my Black Dog does address much the same issue. I feel a number of my poems have been affected by it. You have expressed it here so well as well as the redemption. I hope I can find the joy you express in many of your other works.

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Ruth Walters 29 August 2012

Good subject and good outcome in this very frank poem of yours. I'm sure lots of people can relate to it and I know I certainly can.

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Valerie Dohren 17 August 2012

So pleased you have now recovered - well expressed in your poem, a great write.

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