Monday, March 22, 2010

Depression Comments

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There's a feeling deep inside of me
that makes me want to cry
I don't know what it's doing there,
I keep on asking why.
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Marea Johnson
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Em Jay Christian 23 March 2010

Really beautiful. I love the iambic pentamiter and the flow scheme. I love the honesty here, the true feelings. I could really relate to this poem, it pleases me to see such talent.

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Hazel Suarez 22 March 2010

I REALLY LIKE YOUR POEM. I COULD RELATE TO IT AND ITS REALLY GOOD

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