Wednesday, September 16, 2009

Depression Comments

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A dark, deep cavernous hole is where your lost
distant from all that matters to you any more
all of the evils you have faced are there with you
teasing and tormenting you, clawing and reaching for you
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Jean Dament 16 September 2009

You sure described depression well; while expressing deep emotions with flare. I invite you to read my two poems on depression called, 'Out of Darkness' & 'Trapped.' Ravensong

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Rani Turton 16 September 2009

These lines are stronger than ' the monsters your facing now' because they have given these fears and monsters a name: depression. Well written and poetic as well.

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