Depressed Comments

This is a really good poem! I particularly like the first 4 verses, lines such as 'as i'd gotten older, the world had grown colder; but i had found a warmth in her soul' or 'you think I'm selfish for wanting to die, but I think you're selfish for making me stay alive' are so evocative and well expressed. I'd suggest you to work out a bit the fifth verse, which sounds somewhat unclear, but I think that you've done a great job overall. Keep up the good work, all the best / Artiom