Depressed Comments
I sit here, in this darkened corner,
bleeding at the wrists,
the scissors still lay open,
my hands clenched into fists
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Depression manifests in several ways, sometimes as violent as you said....overcoming depression especially by young is a great challange people are facing today. You have taken up a very apt subject and dealt t so wonderfully, touchingly....10+
You have expressed the helplessness of the 'black dog' of depression very effectively in this dramatic poem. I also like your used of rhyme and the general phrasing of the piece. Hopefully the subject matter is not too close to home. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I love you Amie and i'm right beside you sitting beside lovely Aimes..... love and all the best Emma English, very good keep it up, I'm smiling at you! ! ! oxxxo
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7/19/2025 10:14:11 PM # 1.0.0
The structure and rhyme is fetching - when it appears effortless one knows the tone is just right! Great stuff. Rgds, Ivan