Sunday, March 2, 2008

Deppression Comments

Rating: 4.5

Nobody loves me
Nobody even cares
When I need to open up
Then nobody's there
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norman hale
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Bonnie Collins 02 March 2008

very sad, and the expression you conveyed really touched my heart...... Keep up your good work, the rest in life will heal its own wound..... Best wishes.... Bonnie Collins

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Jade DragonHeart 02 March 2008

Hey Norman, I can understand what this poem means and I can believe every word and I do. You are a good writer and I think that you should keep at it. THis is a great piece of poetry. Keep it up.

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