Thursday, August 24, 2006

Departure In The Woods (The Turning Of Youth) Comments

Rating: 4.5

It was under this ancient ocean of sky
As silent flying birds passed me by
Something upped and bid farewell
what to be its replacement I could not tell.
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Dennis Ernesto Ruiz 24 August 2006

nice poem... it sounds a bit like robert frost without the icy and freezy nature of the poet. it's a bit autumnal.... by the way... on the second verse last line... 'chocked' or choked? ....i think it's a nine.

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