Friday, July 29, 2011

Departure Delayed? Comments

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I caught a thread upon a nail, unravelling my thoughts
of flashing lights and siren's wail and children in their cots
Of such urbane banality with apathetic gaze
each Zombie-esque fatality adds more to the malaise.
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Dan Reynolds
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Romeo Della Valle 12 August 2011

Impressive! A very touching, well penned and poignant! I love its imagery and rhyme! 10+++ well deserved! Keep inspiring the World with your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ....

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Tai Chi Italy 29 July 2011

A beautiful rhythm and rhyme, pity about the world you described! lol Jack of break of hearts! As you will see it was time for me to depart. See you at writerscafe Smiling at you Tai x

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