Thursday, January 1, 2004

Departure Comments

Rating: 2.8

Thousands of tiny
fists tamping the surface of the lake
flowing like a wide
river gone crazy, southeast, westnorth
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Christianne Balk
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Lawerence Mize 15 April 2014

Enjoyed the imagery in this one. Thanks for sharing.

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Paul Reed 15 April 2014

Very descriptive, lots of colours, paints a picture with words

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Briana Knight 15 April 2012

I love it. Very good imagry. You may hear that all the time but it's true. Can you read my work and tell me how to improve? Thanx

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Jan Hauck 15 April 2012

I do not know why this poem has such a low rating. This is exactly the kind of poetry and language to be proud of. Great poem, on par with Sylvia Plath, I think.

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