Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Departure Comments

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Husband...
where is the evidence
that we existed?
It consisted of two
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Sally Plumb Plumb
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Walterrean Salley 12 August 2012

Spoken from the depths of your heart. So moving, and yet so mystically beautiful. Thanks Sally.

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Sally P. P. 11 January 2020

Thank you for your lovely comment.It will always be appreciated.

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Heather Wilson 11 August 2012

A heartfelt write, sadly written I feel, but beautiful all the same. thank you for sharing.

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Joseph Anderson 10 August 2012

A deeply probing free verse. Very impactful. As good, or better than any I have seen I feel the pain. So very good

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 08 August 2012

Full of nice lines those have things to say if we think deeply high one!

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Valerie Dohren 07 August 2012

Beautiful write Sally, very poignant and sad, and the pain you feel over the loss of your husband is so very evident. Hope the passage of time will bring brighter dawns for you.

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Haverhill Suffolk England
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