Sunday, March 14, 2010

* Departure~ Comments

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Affections we shared were divine
On the road of friendship
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Eyan Desir
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 April 2010

‘…All that remains are/Pictures in the frame. I’d not say it as a sad poem…still some got a place in ‘Frame’ …many are there who stay unidentified and unrecognized… they’re too great….actually mindset is what important Finally God’s Intelligence actually programs our shares…why lament about…? Nice poem Sir 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Kranthi Pothineni 19 March 2010

Sad poem with rich feel and its words are true. Moving write.

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nice rhythm. sad poem.: (. don't let women smash your heart. good poem

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Miriam Maia Padua 16 March 2010

Really nice.... very inspiring...thoughts of pure friendship, of pure love...a commitment this is really a great poet...sweet and romantic..touching... Thanks for sharing.... 10+++ Maia

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Miriam Maia Padua 16 March 2010

Really nice.... very inspiring...thoughts of pure friendship, of pure love...a commitment this is really a great poet...sweet and romantic..touching... Thanks for sharing.... 10+++ Maia

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Miriam Maia Padua 16 March 2010

Really nice.... very inspiring...thoughts of pure friendship, of pure love...a commitment this is really a great poet...sweet and romantic..touching... Thanks for sharing.... 10+++ Maia

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Miriam Maia Padua 16 March 2010

Really nice.... very inspiring...thoughts of pure friendship, of love...a commitment this is really a great poet Thanks for sharing.... 10+++ Maia

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Marieta Maglas 15 March 2010

Love like ours shouldn't die Mari

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Kesav Easwaran 15 March 2010

'Love like ours shouldn't die It falls like rain and kisses the ground'... very good expression...emotionally romantic

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Janell Cressman 14 March 2010

oh that is a really good poem! ! I really liked the flow of it, and i thought it was brilliantly written! ! ! ! ! (10)

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Lady Grace 14 March 2010

''She was the queen that sat Upon the throne of my heart No other beauty could Break our branches apart.''ok, these lines are very sweet... the piece is absolutely nice, ....the flow is nice..of course it is a nice expression.. ian my dear, no departure or no goodbyes for good relationship...

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Romeo Della Valle 14 March 2010

Eyan, honest feelings outspoken through magical words whether through a beautiful songs or poems, it is life in us manifesting itself in different forms, keep it up! 10++++

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Tsira Gogeshvili 14 March 2010

When clouds came with distress The taste of my lips Shined the way to the path I Dried her tears and made her smile. ................................................................ Eyan, Very beautiful, very lovely, - the good fellow..10... Tsira

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