Departure Comments
In the prime of our times
You left citing an obscure reason
Leaving the bird of mistrust
Shuffling its wings in the prison
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A simple heart has been drawn Into the sheer caprice of a beauty Unaware of the tormenting sequel For worshipping a false deity...these lines touched my heart
words of depths speak......echo of a male heart deeply dented by a beloved.... It touched my heart.
I could have nourished new dreams To lift me from inside the agonizing abyss; . Believe me; no one would ever care for you And would say ‘ the dream may makes a new temper
Leaving the bird of mistrust Shuffling its wings in the prison Of my heart; where once your Tear tainted face got engraved i felt this poem so much that it brought tears to my eyes.10+. thanks for sharing. keep them coming :)
In a page of my guiltless life Promises broken were saved. very touching lines.Phenomenal.Very poignant write.
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8/6/2025 10:48:28 AM # 1.0.0
Beautiful poem poured down from your heart. Loved the way you presented it..