Departure Comments
In blacked flames I dance,
tired of playing these games,
bewindering in the blames,
why does this happen to me,
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I really like this poem. It is sad yet beautiful and few poets can capture the emotions shown so clearly in your poem.
WOW that was an amazing poem it was written very well perfect in my eyes great job keep up the good work
Wondeful... And yet Rhythmical, nice work there.
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9/6/2025 8:39:14 AM # 1.0.0
A vivid portrait of love so fresh yet so familiar... Would you pull the shade across us? Blur my vision of perfection? Bitch slap my hopes of this living dream? I have placed my every belief in you, Yet freely you trample upon my soul, Why is this departure so painful? .. The death of love is never a pretty sight, nor is it easy on those who have danced the dream of love... However, it is sometimes an important lesson in achieving the goals of life... Love never dies... Very nice poem...