Departure Comments

Your words written with a honest pen. Amazing poetry.

The sand as white as old bones. the pine trees strangely red where the sun comes down. Wonderful expressions.

Intensity of emotions has enhances the force of the poem manifold. A great poem.

This is a beautiful poem which seems to be more inspired by the mood of Akhmatova than by her actual words. It is not a literal or accurate translation of AA's late poem. I am reminded of some of Ezra Pound's inaccurate but moving translations from the Chinese.

This translation is very inacurate.

Stark. Powerful. Pure undiluted talent.

Short, sharp and lyrical; portentous

The words are touching, and seem to radiate from the heart.

I can not say if it is our love Or the day, that is ending- - - A poignant poem depicting separation from some place or some one dear.

A beautiful creation of poem here experience

So nicely penned.Anna is a great poet

Wonderful poem, great thinking, loved it.10++++

Or the day, that is ending! Nice work.