Departure Comments

Sad poem…rhymed nicely …sorrows are and will be there...and thro’ it poets’ wreath poems… 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

Now its time to fly Into new land of sky But they will stay by Even after this goodbye In my heart until I die ----- fantastic rhyme scheme...a great farewell...wish to borrow this someday! 10+++

Nice flow and rhyme

Kranthi the effort to maintain the same rhyming flow with each line I'm afraid has detracted from the heart of the message. And usually I'm blown away by your work, but sorry this one didn't do it for me. But please message me when you post more work, I know that there will be more to come.

i am sorry, but this one is beyond my comprhension.

leaving the college. it will stay with you for many years.good write voted10 surya

leaving the college. it will stay with you for many years.good write voted10 surya

Time to enter and exit the stage of life.

Nice poem with good rhyme. Keep up the good work, Kranthi.

AMAZING! ! ! ! ! ! ! I like how it's almost all a big rhyme, life is some times hard but if it were easy we wouldn't be as strong. really amazing poem! ! !

nice to read kranthi............ you are writing immensely and profoundly...... also when time permits read my In Poem Hunter..........a tribute.......

Very nice poem with a good rhyme and rhythm. Kudos.

Departure! ! Going away from loved ones family and friends is really killing. Some of them you gonna after quite some time, and some of the friends you may not get a chance to see for a long long time as people move in search of better opportunities. Nice Write.