Departure Comments

Its a nice poem but can you change the last line.... good write anyway

I am begining to be convinced to write a poem without applying any pattern just like some poems of Walt Whitman because I think I can express them poetically.

Very brief expression of inner love and affection.

a highly emotional poem voted10 surya

The last two lines show, how much a matured poet u are now.......Wonderful expression. Eloquent

Loss of words says most.