Friday, October 26, 2018

Departure Comments

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I have hidden my god in a flower
It got pregnant with the dew
I have hidden him in the wine
The sky got drunk
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shurouk hammoud
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Dr Antony Theodore 28 December 2018

ohhhhhh this is marvelous and terrible description of war. they used him as a pullet...... you began with wonderful poetic expressions, hid my God in a flower, pregnant with the dew, in the wine, the sky got drunk, flute, universe, pencil.. dancing poems, horizon, then came.... the terrible turn. assassinating the smiles. marvelous poem dear poetess. thank u. it was a joy to read......... tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 November 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Shurouk. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Sekharan Pookkat 03 November 2018

the smiles of dreamy lips twinkles in the blueish eyes And dances in the rosy cheeks and reflects in black and white - my 10+

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Shurouk Hammoud 04 November 2018

thanks for reading and commenting dear friend

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