Departure Comments

ohhhhhh this is marvelous and terrible description of war. they used him as a pullet...... you began with wonderful poetic expressions, hid my God in a flower, pregnant with the dew, in the wine, the sky got drunk, flute, universe, pencil.. dancing poems, horizon, then came.... the terrible turn. assassinating the smiles. marvelous poem dear poetess. thank u. it was a joy to read......... tony

A refined poetic imagination, Shurouk. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

the smiles of dreamy lips twinkles in the blueish eyes And dances in the rosy cheeks and reflects in black and white - my 10+