Thursday, December 10, 2015

Departure Comments

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It's time I set sail for an unknown shore,
I've rigged the mast the best that I could,
My destination's a mystery,
And I fear, perhaps more than I should
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Lora Colon
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Edward Kofi Louis 30 September 2016

For an unknown shore! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Jak Black 12 December 2015

I've read this poem several times over the past day or so and like it more each time I read it. Life can be tough, sometimes seem cruel, but we must try to cope as best we can without intentionally hurting others. You've lived a good life, therefore you should have no fear of death. Some lovely lines in this poem, the last two stanzas are exceptional. Well done.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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