Departing Note By The Soul ~ Comments

Loved it! Unlike Dante we all have to make that journey alone at some point.

Top marks for this highly philosophical poem. And to my favourite. Thank you so much Asim ji

Each individual is governed by his own 'the Karma'! No one waits for anyone. The journey is always alone.

A powerful poem, dear Asim ji with profound insight and depth.'No references will be accepted, and no preferences will be respected'.

We enjoy the fruits of our own labour.Exactly right dear poet

Brilliant

We all stretch our imagination to built our own perception on this topic which is and will remain elusive from us till eternity.

Loved the poem, it's theme it's emotional build up.5*

Well-said my friend Asim

Now that you are old and frail, I am still young. I reserve the right to leave you at any time. Should you be ready?

Powerful line: No references will be accepted, and no preferences will be respected.

Great write, Yes Soul will leave a note something like this. I would add some emotional part as well.