Departing In The Night Comments
This is for you as you get in your car.
As you drive to the North and you follow that star.
I wished for the tide to come carry me away,
but it left me there standing, both feet in the clay.
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wow...this poem was really really good to read....i really loved it! ! ! .....i think this poem dugged itself into my mind mostly because it rhymes in every line and it doesnt have that lazy drag......it ws just great..keep writing... luv, NiA
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7/27/2025 11:52:16 AM # 1.0.0
Nice rhyming poem. Clever ending.