Friday, May 8, 2009

........Departing Chimes........ Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the bell of departing chimes,
'll I remember my greatest crimes?
When each letter with blood I wrote
Broke my pen and my will fought
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rowan ahmed
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Angelic(Annie) Female 22 May 2009

Oh! this is penned beautifully and brings out the inner sorrows with amazingly selected words.. rated 10! and all the best Rowan :)

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Saadat Tahir 08 May 2009

The poems to which my soul I gave rebel on me and freedom crave Suddenly it seems such a waste How sad and bitter these all taste brilliant and touching u have it rowan write more often...great cheers

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Joseph Poewhit 08 May 2009

There is always hope and tomorrow is another day. One never knows what a day will bring forth.

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