His smile through the gap of his front teeth still lingers on
Uttering his last words 'thanks' in a colloquial accent
He went in, his eyes tired but, filled with rare tears of emotion
A roar of the masses, a comrade, has just disappeared,
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It doesn't matter who its written for, its written well. Prose writing is meant for this kind of thing. The structure of the piece does not have to take the form it does because there is no structure to something like this. This is my only issue here. The rest, is prose personified. GW62