Thursday, June 4, 2009

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On this cold wind filled night my mind taken by change
Just cry cry cry till the sun gave the ongoing world light
Caring not my soul was turned and mangled
My heart ripped at the seams and knotted, tangled
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Mel Mack
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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 June 2009

I watch the world begin and I watch it end.............wonderful phrasing unequaled, love when rocked up the storm, ingenious yet poignant..10++++, thanks forsharing

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Eric Lopez 04 June 2009

Nice poem, you got a way with your words...

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