Departed Comments

this is lovely......good writes. i love it

I can see it all happening, i love the imagery, i love how u bring forth the message.... *HEARTFELT*

I agree with John Hayes below, like the clouds line...

A storm arose in my heart, and the words reached their silent death. I loved that particulat line. It really spoke to me.

“Clouds were everywhere to be seen, Yet there was no rain to shower my seething spirit. ” Good one! I like it!

i like this, tormented but deep

very nice poem...sends great impact on readers' emotions touching... thanks for sharing...

Nice poem, would be nice if there was more content... its very short...

Lovely compilation! !

very sentimental powerful expression of emotion..'Clouds were everywhere to be seen, Yet there was no rain to shower my seething spirit'. Well written

well done... so difficult to cross over!

Excellent. Well written.10 out of 10.

Powerfull and Deeply sentimented... everyone has a moment of darkness..

This poem is excellent though its theme is sad, , good depiction with nice words, , , And I enjoy this read! ! ! Top marks

Hello Vivek Haldar, You poem is beautiful-thank you for sharing 'Departed' with me.

An amazing poem. A really great write.

This is a very moving poem. Loss is very tragic for all...

It's a departure from what i've read lately. well done, take care.

Wow! Deep and heart touching write that is clearly sad but well penned and moving! A few powerful words embedded in this thought provoking write which shows your great feelings and poetic talent! Thanks for sharing! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from NYC...

Wow! Deep and heart touching write that is clearly sad but well penned and moving! A few powerful words embedded in this thought provoking write which shows your great feelings and poetic talent! Thanks for sharing! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from NYC...