Dental Helmet Comments

A different type of poem, but not exotic. Tasty to read and 10 for that.

Onelia! I love this sexy poem! With your usual subtlety you write simultaneously directly and tangentially about the sensations of the longed-for kiss and the relationship that it would stem from. Brilliant imaginative work! x Jan

One, I think that is how a dentist looks at kiss, And a heartfelt love its expression miss. Like the lovers on the Grecian Urn, Perpetual bliss in their minds churn. lol

I read this a while ago...didn't realize I didn't comment....wonderful movement from the hard 'technical' imagery to the sensual...I could visualize the kiss...or hope thereof...Coach

ON ON ON top of things again I see it slithers... but OFF the Boneless...? ? ?

The allure of a smile, and the awareness of your own mouth as you contemplate a kiss in this sensually drawn poem - lovely! justine.

Such an interesting poem, I guess what I take from this is that a smile can bring us down in a thousand steps! It can light up our heart just by the very rays that emit from it. And the way you describe your velvet tongue, surely your muse had no chance of survival! LOL! Love it... HG: -) xx

hahah wow, what a great display of images...i've never seen one analyze the teeth so well. But i sense in the closing lines that this is a metaphor for how a heart can be broken as well, as if teeth were to cut tongue when locking. This one is great, I wish I had thought of it.10/10

Wonderful concept with a wild surreal beauty all of its own...lips speak of kissing and speak with kisses. So sensual in its thought processs and such a unique way of being aware of someone and the about to be about to happen. Wonderful..wonderful...wonderful! love Donall Donall

I love this poem. Wonderfully sexy in an off-beat way. F

How many obstacles between two kissing mouths! Not, only a few.

a unique theme to write a poem, a very observant poet, a poem of lips, tooth. and smile and of course kisses, , , a well-crafted poem,