On the secret seashore
white like a pigeon
we thirsted at noon;
but the water was brackish.
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On the golden sand we wrote her name; Loved the beautifully crafted poem with nice imageries. 10++++ Subhas
Beautiful and deep ink. A poem to read again and again. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.10+++
On the secret seashore white like a pigeon, ..... well penned
The secret seashore invites us to perceive wonder of creation. On the golden sand her name is written by lovely breeze. Very beautiful poem this is. Revising such an outstanding poem is very nice.
A poignant rendition well conceived and nicely brought forth with conviction. An insightful piece of poetry.