Friday, October 26, 2007

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An old couple lived up the lane.
I guess they'd been there 'bout a year.
They seemed like nice folks, proud and plain.
It showed they loved each other dear.
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Ima Ryma
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Goldy Locks 07 November 2007

must you embellish your writing with such simple/trite rhymes..?

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