Wednesday, January 19, 2011

Demons Embrace Comments

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I look past his face,
And into your eyes.
There I see so much grace,
And wish i hadn't told you lies.
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Star Crossed Lady
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Jeri Martindale 27 December 2014

This poem brought up deep feelings in me. Brought me back to when I had these same thoughts. As always great job!

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Jameel Ahmed Ansari 22 February 2011

There I see so much grace And wish i hadnt told u lies, I said I didnt love you, But that's not true. wonderful lines..we so easily say no when comes to reciprocating in love.untill later we realise that was a mistake.you have very nice penned your thoughts.you really are a wonderful writer.keep it up.

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