The demons come to consume me
All around me as far as I can see
Relentless attacks weaken my soul
As the demons start to wear away holes
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To defeat a deman... you must be the fighter... dont shake in the corner and lament crying 'why me'..... take up your trusty sword dear knight and take on the fight. ..... I like your work... words are a great friend
Absolutely fabulous piece, demons are definitely all around us for sure. Why they do it, simply because they can. Anyone can triumph over demons, by having a relationship with the master. The one and only king of all kings, the Father of Jesus, God himself. Read my poem 'Triumph of the only true king'. I believe you will find something of interest in this poem. Keep writing my friend, you are a very good poet and someday you will be a great poet. --------Melvina
Hi Adam, I can only agree wholeheartedly with the previous comments, great piece, tremendous depth and super control! Neil M.