he is calm
he rages within
across his bloody palm
a blade in hand
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a lot of hidden detail... love the idea of an evil angel...
dang...this is a good poem...i loved reading it 10/10
Dude, I hope you aren't talking about yourself. Anyway, This is a very, very good poem. When are you going to write more. I'm getting a little impatient, sorry.
i love ur poems they r really good... dont ever stop writing!