Demon Skies Comments
The pale moon floats through demon skies
Her aspect cold and eerie
Against the raging storm she vies -
Her heart thus ever weary
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Your skies are possessed now but their vigour is amazing. Vivid description of factual phases and cohesion stand by the write. The demons are endearing too...
The mystical and mysterious charisma of the moon so beautifully captured! ! Superb write! !
Good blend of factual imagination. Night's dark agents do clamour around yet day shall blow his conch to sound!
Moon, the solitary tramp of the 'demon skies'! She is weary and frightened, so appears pale. What a fanciful poetic interpretation! Another splendid write!
Superb blend of metaphoric imagery, we can not only see your vision we can also nearly feel it. Excellent writing.
Beautiful With enigmatic imagery..................................................................: O)
Cinematic effect you have brought thru your diction.Loved as I always love your poem.
Vivid description of factual phases and cohesion stand by the write. The demons are endearing too...
The title pained me a bit, as the poem is rich with graphic beauty, then i got it, it's not just your simple praise of nature, it's your aggression...in all positive & unique colour...
A beautiful and subtle poem which touches the heart. An enjoyable read.
Your Demon Skies was a joy to read Val, beautiful poem and title.
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8/2/2025 5:51:03 PM # 1.0.0
As I now gaze out my east window, through the trees dancing in the wind and see the full moon mingling with the clouds, haunting in the darkness, demons of the night. Lovely poem on nature's mood swings.......