Saturday, October 23, 2004

Demolition Comments

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The demolition crews are out,
And twice this week, I saw
Crunching into brick and steel,
A huge crane's T-rex maw.
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Max Reif
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Ernestine Northover 29 September 2005

It's happening everywhere, so many good buildings being knocked down to build some monstrosity. How some of the designs pass the planning stage I'll never know. But we are powerless to stop it! Money talks! Sincerely Ernestine Northover.

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Maggie Flanagan-Wilkie 14 August 2005

'The demolition crews are out, And twice this week, I saw Crunching into brick and steel, A huge crane's T-rex maw.' Max, the last two verses of this stanza need to swap places, I think. The demolition crews are out, And twice this week, I saw A huge crane's T-rex maw. Crunch into brick and steel,

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Ivy Christou 21 June 2005

'The skyline of the mind Adjusts to what we see. I'll scarce be able to recall The way it used to be. ' WOW! that doesn't apply to buildings or changes to the city as it expands, it applies to life in general! Excellent work! HBH

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