Friday, November 29, 2013

Democracy Vs. Dictatorship Comments

Rating: 5.0

The kangaroo ordered an orange juice.
The crocodile preferred a cup of coffee.
Holding the Party Paper, Edition Zoo,
The hyena opted for his downy dream,
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Paul Hartal
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Chinedu Dike 28 July 2019

A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. A poignant piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing, Paul.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 October 2018

I loved how you pointed out the differences between Democracy and Dictatorship. A wonderful poem. Beautifully crafted and well executed write.10+++ To my Poem List.

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Richard Wlodarski 18 August 2017

What an imaginative poem! It is both humorous and profound. And speaks so eloquently to the events happening today. Thoroughly enjoyed it! !

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Kim Barney 28 May 2015

Interesting poem. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Mike Barrett 21 December 2013

Interesting....to me, democracy with all its weaknesses is the lesser evil of all forms of government.....it deludes the population into believing that they have a say in how a country is run and it keeps alive the myth of the golden apple, that is if you work long enough and hard enough, success and riches will be yours. You're invited to check out some of my poems... we Canadian poets must strive to have a greater presence in the world of poetry! Cheers!

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