Dementia Comments

There is a lot of very good imagery. I had a very clear picture in my head while reading well done.

Wonderful poem. Great job, unveiling the sad reality of life - well communicated. May you continue. voted 10

very nice written.. it delivers feeling and meaning..

i like this one well done keep up the good work (:

The thought is clear, however, I am a different generation. I grew up to 15 age without a doctor, so I learned to find people who explains the sicknesses differently then a doctor. In this case the dementia comes when someone wants to forget some bad memory of his life, so he looses all, because do not want to face the world with what he did. The poem is well written.

Your poem has this capacity of creating a picture or scenario or flow of evevnts infront of the eyes.......great :)

nice experience, I pictured the scene while reading this.loved it a good poem.keep it up! !

Really great poem. Enjoyed it. Great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, World On It's Knees