Demanding Granary. Comments
Man was blind in and out,
Even with eyes sharp and senses blessed.
Ages of wandering, crossing earth-skirts,
In pursuit of caves, leaves, fish and animals,
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Hazaro kwhishey aesi har khawahish pe dum nikle... bht nikle mere arman phir b kam nikle......your poem skillfully come up true to this verses, how beautifully u show out the parched tongue of mankind, not nourished even men comes at the stage of death.usage of diction is quite bombastic & how u put up whole nature in urs poem...well done, make me speechless
Even when man boasts of having travelled through eons of evolution and progress, how little he has bee able to harness, till, sow and harvest and how much more lies barren and sterile without giving copious yield! As a result his granary is never full! Instead of plentifulness, there is a gross dearth of stock! A great write! !
eyes set even to the nocturnal skies, good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote.
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9/4/2025 3:41:58 PM # 1.0.0
a great and touched my heart type of poem love your words to its fullest great one...