Saturday, May 23, 2015

Delusive Cherubs Comments

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Butterfly, the symbol of innocence
Arrives dancing, fluttering rainbow wings
Adores plant with pearly eggs
glued atop leaves, buds and pods
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 04 June 2015

i just read your poem. i love nature, i love butterflies. didn't imagine that it could be so well worded. thank you for reading my poem.

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Valsa George 24 May 2015

The leaves, flowers and pods innocently give accommodation to the larve born out of butterflies! But slowly gnawing at the buds and flowers they grow and through metaphorsis emerge into a butterflies! Without knowing the damage, the plants again welcome... those delusive cherubs! A unique write!

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I feel blessed to have your comments Valsa. Thank you so much.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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