Delusions Sweetened Comments

lovely voyage of the psyche, I think it might be better to be called illusions sweetened, since the semantics of delsions are perhaps misleading 10+

illusions and delusions when sweetened and served in a 'dream platter' most doesn't want to be awaken... for it is more appetizing than to stay in a real world where they have a bitter taste of life...I think this poem needs more follow up verses, the desert has not been served.

TRULY...LOVELY SERVING ON A DREAM PLATTER...

From the poet's soul. Great.

what a fast writeup. are you serious that you want wake from this illusory........? intersting indeed. jayan

The very least you can do is serve your loved one with 'desires raw and ripe'. My you both enjoy your banquet. Fx

Its work such as this, that made it no surprise to me, when i saw that statistically, that you are one of the most popularly read Poet's on this site, my friend. You are indeed a bonifide Poet, with all the necessary trimmings.I am a writer of essay, journalism, and corporate business correspondence and have never professed myself as being a Poet....however, because i have indulged in reading Poetry & studying the science & art of poetics for the past 5 years, i still feel qualified in being able to eyeshot absolute talent. And you, my friend....have it! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

A feast of illusions, well penned my friend, 10 for this Lynda xx

food for thought! ! ! very well done sir.

ur delusion dish is better than my illusive cry.The best as always.

i can't add anything to this marvelous poem's comment than what Yusof has already said. Kesav 10 and more..

the ingredient and receipe were prepared by the master chef..........to produce a killer punch. great write.

Absolutely great! Sweetened DELUSIONS!

Wow I love the first stanza, it's divine. Whole poem is good though. Well done Kesav. HG: -) xx

This is magnificent poetry. The sesnse wrapped up in a seemingly gastric orgy, what poetic splendor. Regards Jon Alan

The hunger of desires can never be satisfied! In simple words depths of philosophy! Well said Sir!

Mind has too many dimensions.Illusion, delusion, hallucination...limitless.Fasten them all into one godly with prayers.Nice writing.Thanks

For that matter, every thing in the world is illusion or maya they say. A good theme you have taken for your poem.

Sweet poem, well written. Enjoyed. Go on writing, Easwaran.

let it be an illusion...one sweet moment lived gives tremendous thrust to rest of life...never mind an illusion or delusion...but wht's reality in the first place? do we know it?