Delusions Of Grandeur Comments

lucid flow, nice work

This is a very, very good poem with great rhythm and rhyme. I don't say that much. I gave it a 9 because some people might not fully grasp its meaning. To transmit meaning without obscurity seems like something that so many either have a hard time doing or they just don't believe they should. I shall argue to my dying breath that they should. Because, if they don't, they run the real risk that they will leave nothing behind. Is there a worse fate for an artist? I think not. Greenwolfe 1962

A brilliant poem, it flows so freely, thank you!