Delusions Comments

each and every poem of yours is read like this: G~R~E~A~T~N~E~S~S~ and this one is no different. good job V. Becca

Is happiness a delusion or mirage like illusion, Whenever i go near, it escapes like a deer. Good expression in a verse form

Your reads carry so much emotions. Some are almost painful to read. what a great job you have done on this one. Your flow and vocabulary are excellent. I enjoyed this read very much. keep writing I'll keep reading; -)

On bended knee I sacrifice all pretence of sanity to my dreams, and through clenched palms I ask to wallow in delusions again. ___________________________________ and wallowing in the cloying waves of insanity a buoy I accidently stepped on disdainly I took a plunge for insanity that love endows worth million loveless Magi put together

wow...as usual i'm left breathless at the beautiful wording. Sometimes loneliness is a welcoming escape from delusion...10

This is a pretty powerful poem. You are a fantastic writer. I think this poem about love's delusions is true at times. Ahh the delusions we sometimes face when in love.

So much in that last stanza... Moving. Roger.

A 10 from me without delusions great piece Tom

Great write with your dark dusky tones a big ten for a big heart Chris