Tuesday, May 27, 2014

Delusion Or The Distortion Of Reality Comments

Rating: 4.5

I have come to the conclusion,
That we live in deep delusion,
About all that we're about,
What is good and what is bad?
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Sandra Feldman
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Khairul Ahsan 26 June 2014

Your conclusion about our 'deep delusion' may be true for some, but your inference that ' Nothing known, and nothing fixed, Makes the World a 'dangerous mix' ' is true for all time.

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Juan Olivarez 28 May 2014

Lovely poem. Excellent rhymes.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 27 May 2014

Very Good. This is a fine poem. You have really good imagery and it is easily read and understood.

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