Wednesday, February 3, 2010

Delusion Of One Comments

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Born: Year of the Dragon.
Horoscope: 'Today's the lucky day.'

Luck, you say? O.K. Once. In a small town
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Warren Falcon
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R. H. Peat 11 July 2010

A very interesting poem Warren. I like your use of metaphors to depict difficulties. they work well. Also victim poetry needs to alway offer something beyond just being a victim; which your poem suggest to me. Thanx for sharing. Please comment on one of my poems; I've newly posted poems here. a poet friend RH Peat

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Spartanburg, South Carolina, USA
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