Delusion Comments

Evokes a lot of strong images, imagination, and thinking.

your writing is excellent! !

your school time poem reads good, Min...reflects the talent that sprouted that early in you...10

Graphically poignant given the poems intent. Wrought with outstanding imagery and emotion, just an excellent poem.

Lifeless below now and frozen charm Fountain of truth awaken the time Ears, eyes had broken and king's forgotten Alas! Untwined from great delusion But trapped from sin's imprison...........................wonerful piece of work that makes me speechless by its beauty of grace yet with metaphors and imagery, well penned,10++++, thanks

even since that age.. you had and still have a poetic soul.. its amazing dear sweet girl..

Yes too good for high school,10 from Tom

too good dear for high school class it surely deserves an A+ regards anjali

great start..as I noticed written in high school..it should be graded A..a nice composition for a start...Does your teacher an English Literature Teacher, who knows Shakespeare and Edgar Allan Poe and et. al? or knows Balagtas or balagtasan only..this is a wonderful poem... Ency Bearis

A very nice piece of work.Thank you for sharing it with us; and to learn from your experiences in during your High School days as well. Edward Kofi Louis.