Sunday, October 21, 2012

Deluge Comments

Rating: 5.0

Summer's evening storm
Darkens my window
With the close pressure
Of humid air
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William B. Deutscher
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William Jackson 21 October 2012

I really like Deluge; the sensory imagery brings it alive. This is the stuff of real poetry. Thank you for writing it! I tire of reading bad poetry. This is good!

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