Delmar Loop Revelation Comments

i like this poem: its style and its imagery! u.

A very tight and well written poem. Is there any limit to how good you're getting?

The silence roared! Like the ocean of your head! A short story in itself.

This is both mysterious and beautiful. Love the simile about the tongues of bells...babushkas and jeans...how surreal! I loved it all. Raynette

short but still long enough to take me there and let me watch all that! splendid work Max! HBH

Max, you're master of the short, short story, yet still maintaining a certain lyricism.

your words took me there- what other compliment could you possibly need? Wonderful writing my friend... Always, Amberlee