Tuesday, September 3, 2013

Deliverance From Self Comments

Rating: 5.0

Through you I lose myself
That, which is everything and nothing
All at the same time
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Lizzie Lum
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Khairul Ahsan 30 September 2013

This indeed is one of the best poems I have read in this forum. I gave it 10/10 here, and voted 'Excellent' on the contest page. 'It is with your bare hands That I dig for the forgotten pieces Of lost ancient puzzles And grasp myself as the universe So cherish distant worlds In the palm of my trembling hand ' Simply mesmerizing! Thanks for this beautiful poem.

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Ana Reynolds 18 September 2013

beautiful poem Lizzie, you creative warrior you! xx

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